旧诗新写...

舒海军

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旧诗新写...

<br/></p><p>&nbsp; 晚上头昏...写错了部分字.</p>

陆舍无

<font color="#0909f7"><div class="quote"><font color="#0909f7">这多麻烦,直接贴出来就行了啊~~~</font></div></font><p><img src="attachments/dvbbs/2006-10/2006102811112281574.jpg" border="0" onload="if(this.width>screen.width*0.7) {this.resized=true; this.width=screen.width*0.7; this.alt=\'Click here to open new window\nCTRL+Mouse wheel to zoom in/out\';}" onmouseover="if(this.width>screen.width*0.7) {this.resized=true; this.width=screen.width*0.7; this.style.cursor=\'hand\'; this.alt=\'Click here to open new window\nCTRL+Mouse wheel to zoom in/out\';}" onclick="if(!this.resized) {return true;} else {window.open(\'attachments/dvbbs/2006-10/2006102811112281574.jpg\');}" onmousewheel="return imgzoom(this);" alt="" /><br/></p>

陆舍无

字写的不错,注意行气,字势要连贯,几个长竖处理不够理想~~~

舒海军

我怎么贴不上呢?老说我图片太大.又不会处理..两个竖处理的太糟糕..其实换种写法就可以了．这几天改过再写．．

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