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yunquan

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陆舍无

字写的很好了,要完善作品的整体因素～～～

寒龍

<p>好东西...学习了...</p>[em02]

杨彦章

有一定基础，但法度不够。拙见。

珂默

<p>基础不错，学习了</p>

孙光松

<p>写的不错.盖上印效果会更好.第三幅整体章法呈"左半圆形"了,看看能否用印章矫正一下.</p>

[此贴子已经被作者于2006-6-14 15:47:51编辑过]

yunquan

<div class="quote"><b>以下是引用<i>陆舍无</i>在2006-6-14 10:18:28的发言：</b><br/>字写的很好了,要完善作品的整体因素～～～</div><p>希望陆老师能具体指导一下.先谢了.</p>

我行我素

瘦硬通神

yunquan

<div class="quote"><b>以下是引用<i>孙光松</i>在2006-6-14 15:47:02的发言：</b><br/><p>写的不错.盖上印效果会更好.第三幅整体章法呈"左半圆形"了,看看能否用印章矫正一下.</p><br/></div><p>谢孙老师指点.这些是我平日的习作,一般不盖章,不过你说了,我会去试试的.</p>

yunquan

以上评点的师友,本人在此谢谢了.