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丑丑鱼

<div class="quote"><b>以下是引用<i>段振祥</i>在2006-7-12 13:22:30的发言：</b><br/>等着吧，柳老师好像没你那么清闲呀[em01]</div><p><img alt="" src="http://www.zgybsf.com/bbs/Skins/default/topicface/face9.gif"/><img alt="" src="http://www.zgybsf.com/bbs/Skins/default/topicface/face11.gif"/><img alt="" src="http://www.zgybsf.com/bbs/Skins/default/topicface/face14.gif"/>郁闷中！</p>

把酒临风

<p>热烈祝贺门诊开张！</p><p></p>

段振祥

<div class="quote"><b>以下是引用<i>丑丑鱼</i>在2006-7-12 16:19:40的发言：</b><br/><p><img alt="" src="http://www.zgybsf.com/bbs/Skins/default/topicface/face9.gif"/><img alt="" src="http://www.zgybsf.com/bbs/Skins/default/topicface/face11.gif"/><img alt="" src="http://www.zgybsf.com/bbs/Skins/default/topicface/face14.gif"/>郁闷中！</p></div><p>有名师指点还郁闷？[em05]</p>

丑丑鱼

<div class="quote"><b>以下是引用<i>段振祥</i>在2006-7-12 22:16:14的发言：</b><br/><p>有名师指点还郁闷？[em05]</p></div><p><font face="楷体_GB2312">这里好像只有我和你最清闲啊．</font></p>[em09][em01][em01][em01]

钱宝成

<p>我的字，怎么没人关注哟！</p><p></p><p></p>

柳长忠

<div class="quote"><b>以下是引用<i>段振祥</i>在2006-7-11 10:15:04的发言：</b><br/><p>&nbsp;</p><img src="attachments/dvbbs/2006-7/200671110314729438.jpg" border="0" onload="if(this.width>screen.width*0.7) {this.resized=true; this.width=screen.width*0.7; this.alt=\'Click here to open new window\nCTRL+Mouse wheel to zoom in/out\';}" onmouseover="if(this.width>screen.width*0.7) {this.resized=true; this.width=screen.width*0.7; this.style.cursor=\'hand\'; this.alt=\'Click here to open new window\nCTRL+Mouse wheel to zoom in/out\';}" onclick="if(!this.resized) {return true;} else {window.open(\'attachments/dvbbs/2006-7/200671110314729438.jpg\');}" onmousewheel="return imgzoom(this);" alt="" /><br/><br/></div><p><font size="6"></font></p><p><font size="6">振祥的草书第一印象很好，如行云流水，一路舒畅。但我感觉草书的品位不高，还需找点草书帖临一临哈！</font></p><p></p>

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段振祥

<p>谢谢柳老师的指点，振祥明白了。</p>

昆仑山人

<img src="attachments/dvbbs/2006-6/200662620141948200.jpg" border="0" onload="if(this.width>screen.width*0.7) {this.resized=true; this.width=screen.width*0.7; this.alt=\'Click here to open new window\nCTRL+Mouse wheel to zoom in/out\';}" onmouseover="if(this.width>screen.width*0.7) {this.resized=true; this.width=screen.width*0.7; this.style.cursor=\'hand\'; this.alt=\'Click here to open new window\nCTRL+Mouse wheel to zoom in/out\';}" onclick="if(!this.resized) {return true;} else {window.open(\'attachments/dvbbs/2006-6/200662620141948200.jpg\');}" onmousewheel="return imgzoom(this);" alt="" /><br/><img src="attachments/dvbbs/2006-6/200662620144299753.jpg" border="0" onload="if(this.width>screen.width*0.7) {this.resized=true; this.width=screen.width*0.7; this.alt=\'Click here to open new window\nCTRL+Mouse wheel to zoom in/out\';}" onmouseover="if(this.width>screen.width*0.7) {this.resized=true; this.width=screen.width*0.7; this.style.cursor=\'hand\'; this.alt=\'Click here to open new window\nCTRL+Mouse wheel to zoom in/out\';}" onclick="if(!this.resized) {return true;} else {window.open(\'attachments/dvbbs/2006-6/200662620144299753.jpg\');}" onmousewheel="return imgzoom(this);" alt="" /><br/><img src="attachments/dvbbs/2006-6/200662620145215290.jpg" border="0" onload="if(this.width>screen.width*0.7) {this.resized=true; this.width=screen.width*0.7; this.alt=\'Click here to open new window\nCTRL+Mouse wheel to zoom in/out\';}" onmouseover="if(this.width>screen.width*0.7) {this.resized=true; this.width=screen.width*0.7; this.style.cursor=\'hand\'; this.alt=\'Click here to open new window\nCTRL+Mouse wheel to zoom in/out\';}" onclick="if(!this.resized) {return true;} else {window.open(\'attachments/dvbbs/2006-6/200662620145215290.jpg\');}" onmousewheel="return imgzoom(this);" alt="" />

[此贴子已经被作者于2006-7-13 21:16:41编辑过]

柳长忠

<div class="quote"><b>以下是引用<i>丑丑鱼</i>在2006-7-12 9:08:49的发言：</b><br/><img src="attachments/dvbbs/2006-7/2006712981597702.jpg" border="0" onload="if(this.width>screen.width*0.7) {this.resized=true; this.width=screen.width*0.7; this.alt=\'Click here to open new window\nCTRL+Mouse wheel to zoom in/out\';}" onmouseover="if(this.width>screen.width*0.7) {this.resized=true; this.width=screen.width*0.7; this.style.cursor=\'hand\'; this.alt=\'Click here to open new window\nCTRL+Mouse wheel to zoom in/out\';}" onclick="if(!this.resized) {return true;} else {window.open(\'attachments/dvbbs/2006-7/2006712981597702.jpg\');}" onmousewheel="return imgzoom(this);" alt="" /><br/></div><p><font size="5">从这幅行楷习作可以看出作者写字还是比较认真的，字的架势也已初步拉开，有一定的练字潜力。但总的印象是基础还很差，基本笔画还没有搞清，结构也是没有做到排布均匀，重心平稳。要注意横平（略取斜势）竖直，撇捺舒展，转折处顿笔直转，起笔收笔要干净利落，不能按自己习气去写，一定要找一本适合自己的传统古帖，悉心临习，先求形似，再追神似，起码要坚持两三年临帖，才会有所成！</font></p>

柳长忠

<p><a href="http://www.zgybsf.com/bbs/bbsUploadFile/2006-7/20067106213787158.jpg" target="_blank"><img title="dvubb" alt="图片点击可在新窗口打开查看" src="http://www.zgybsf.com/bbs/bbsUploadFile/2006-7/20067106213787158.jpg" border="0"/></a></p><p></p><p><font size="5">宝成这幅楷书还看得出李洪川老师楷书的影子，特点是用笔较厚重，带有碑味！但我感觉只得到李老师的少数东西，整体上看还有不少问题。我认为李洪川老师的字有他的长处，有不少属于自己的东西，这些东西处理得好就是精彩的部分，相反处理不好就成了习气，这尤其对审美格调不高者会带去一些影响，没有学到他的好的东西，反而会把他的习气扩大化。那么，我觉得宝成就是把他的一些习气学来了，比如笔画太过生硬，没有圆润的搭配，横钩、竖弯钩等显得尤其生硬，结字多扁平方正而少其他形态，排列显得松散，字与字之间没有多少内在联系。我认为还需从原碑帖中多汲取营养，学书的心态要保持平常，静下来，好好临帖，才会有大的进步，也才是唯一出路。</font></p><p><font size="5"></font></p><p></p>

[此贴子已经被作者于2006-7-13 22:24:19编辑过]