第一次参加中钢赛.真诚请教各位师友!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

杨宇力

<span style="FONT-SIZE: 12px;"><font size="3">第一次参加中钢赛.<br/>这两天写写命题内容,<br/>因为常常喜欢看些篆隶方面的帖<br/>所以草书中偶尔会夹杂一点篆隶的字法<br/>也曾见吴昌硕潘天寿刘江等行书行楷中夹杂过一些<br/>当代书坛也会见到不少,诸如刘彦湖等<br/>不过他们都是名家<br/><font color="#ff0000">我想真诚请教各位师友:</font><br/>要是我在草书中夹杂一点篆隶的字法算不算硬伤!?<br/>随意挑出几例如下图片:</font></span><img src="attachments/dvbbs/2006-9/200691418364138947.jpg" border="0" onload="if(this.width>screen.width*0.7) {this.resized=true; this.width=screen.width*0.7; this.alt=\'Click here to open new window\nCTRL+Mouse wheel to zoom in/out\';}" onmouseover="if(this.width>screen.width*0.7) {this.resized=true; this.width=screen.width*0.7; this.style.cursor=\'hand\'; this.alt=\'Click here to open new window\nCTRL+Mouse wheel to zoom in/out\';}" onclick="if(!this.resized) {return true;} else {window.open(\'attachments/dvbbs/2006-9/200691418364138947.jpg\');}" onmousewheel="return imgzoom(this);" alt="" /><br/><img src="attachments/dvbbs/2006-9/20069141837411453.jpg" border="0" onload="if(this.width>screen.width*0.7) {this.resized=true; this.width=screen.width*0.7; this.alt=\'Click here to open new window\nCTRL+Mouse wheel to zoom in/out\';}" onmouseover="if(this.width>screen.width*0.7) {this.resized=true; this.width=screen.width*0.7; this.style.cursor=\'hand\'; this.alt=\'Click here to open new window\nCTRL+Mouse wheel to zoom in/out\';}" onclick="if(!this.resized) {return true;} else {window.open(\'attachments/dvbbs/2006-9/20069141837411453.jpg\');}" onmousewheel="return imgzoom(this);" alt="" /><br/>

杨宇力

<span class="smalltxt"><span class="bold"><strong><font face="Arial" size="5">此处首字"春"</font></strong></span></span><img src="attachments/dvbbs/2006-9/200691418383340242.jpg" border="0" onload="if(this.width>screen.width*0.7) {this.resized=true; this.width=screen.width*0.7; this.alt=\'Click here to open new window\nCTRL+Mouse wheel to zoom in/out\';}" onmouseover="if(this.width>screen.width*0.7) {this.resized=true; this.width=screen.width*0.7; this.style.cursor=\'hand\'; this.alt=\'Click here to open new window\nCTRL+Mouse wheel to zoom in/out\';}" onclick="if(!this.resized) {return true;} else {window.open(\'attachments/dvbbs/2006-9/200691418383340242.jpg\');}" onmousewheel="return imgzoom(this);" alt="" /><br/>

[此贴子已经被作者于2006-9-14 18:38:35编辑过]

杨宇力

<table height="100%" cellspacing="0" cellpadding="0" width="100%" border="0" style="TABLE-LAYOUT: fixed; WORD-WRAP: break-word;"><tbody><tr><td valign="top"><a href="http://www.zhoujizhong.com/misc.php?action=viewratings&amp;tid=16051&amp;pid=123117" name="pid123117" alt="查看评分记录"></a><span class="smalltxt"><span class="bold"><strong><font face="Arial" size="5">此处"天","南"字</font></strong></span></span></td></tr></tbody></table><img src="attachments/dvbbs/2006-9/200691418394845894.jpg" border="0" onload="if(this.width>screen.width*0.7) {this.resized=true; this.width=screen.width*0.7; this.alt=\'Click here to open new window\nCTRL+Mouse wheel to zoom in/out\';}" onmouseover="if(this.width>screen.width*0.7) {this.resized=true; this.width=screen.width*0.7; this.style.cursor=\'hand\'; this.alt=\'Click here to open new window\nCTRL+Mouse wheel to zoom in/out\';}" onclick="if(!this.resized) {return true;} else {window.open(\'attachments/dvbbs/2006-9/200691418394845894.jpg\');}" onmousewheel="return imgzoom(this);" alt="" /><br/><img src="attachments/dvbbs/2006-9/20069141840339997.jpg" border="0" onload="if(this.width>screen.width*0.7) {this.resized=true; this.width=screen.width*0.7; this.alt=\'Click here to open new window\nCTRL+Mouse wheel to zoom in/out\';}" onmouseover="if(this.width>screen.width*0.7) {this.resized=true; this.width=screen.width*0.7; this.style.cursor=\'hand\'; this.alt=\'Click here to open new window\nCTRL+Mouse wheel to zoom in/out\';}" onclick="if(!this.resized) {return true;} else {window.open(\'attachments/dvbbs/2006-9/20069141840339997.jpg\');}" onmousewheel="return imgzoom(this);" alt="" /><br/>

[此贴子已经被作者于2006-9-14 18:40:04编辑过]

杨宇力

<span class="smalltxt"><span class="bold"><strong><font face="Arial" size="5">此处"清"字,另"明"字这么写算不算草法有问题?</font></strong></span></span><img src="attachments/dvbbs/2006-9/200691418413839058.jpg" border="0" onload="if(this.width>screen.width*0.7) {this.resized=true; this.width=screen.width*0.7; this.alt=\'Click here to open new window\nCTRL+Mouse wheel to zoom in/out\';}" onmouseover="if(this.width>screen.width*0.7) {this.resized=true; this.width=screen.width*0.7; this.style.cursor=\'hand\'; this.alt=\'Click here to open new window\nCTRL+Mouse wheel to zoom in/out\';}" onclick="if(!this.resized) {return true;} else {window.open(\'attachments/dvbbs/2006-9/200691418413839058.jpg\');}" onmousewheel="return imgzoom(this);" alt="" /><br/>

[此贴子已经被作者于2006-9-14 18:41:40编辑过]

杨宇力

<font size="6"><strong>请各位师友给予指点!谢谢啦!</strong></font>

含雪轩主人

有些生硬。

含雪轩主人

<p>订阅《中国钢笔书法》杂志20余年，尚未参加过“中钢”大赛，准备加入阿中之队，试一试，共同努力吧。</p>

杨宇力

<div class="quote"><b>以下是引用<i>含雪轩主人</i>在2006-9-14 23:17:39的发言：</b><br/>有些生硬。</div><blockquote><table class="tablebody2" width="90%" border="0" style="TABLE-LAYOUT: fixed; WORD-BREAK: break-all;"><tbody><tr><td width="100%" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 12pt;"><img alt="发贴心情" src="http://bbs.yingbishufa.com/Skins/Default/topicface/face1.gif" align="absMiddle" border="0"/>&nbsp;<b></b><br/><p>感谢<strong><em>含雪轩主人</em></strong>的批评！</p><p>是的，最近是想自己的作品有所变化，</p><p>但难以定位和把握方向</p><p>感觉到艺术观念字外工夫的重要啊</p><p>欢迎各位师友继续批评，不吝赐教！拜谢！！！</p></td></tr></tbody></table></blockquote>

崔伦强

<p>杨老师,吾以为狂野了些.</p><p>不够涵蕴.</p>

【米真居士】

好！！有想法！~~有追求！~~~~~~