近期的书法小品.请书友批评.

熊新华

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熊新华

<p>多谢楼上的几位书友的批评指正.我现在是重在打基础,目前最缺的就是作品的气韵.</p>

舒海军

<p>以第二张为列."走"字第程式化,"把"字写放了.老米是最后一笔有几个提按动作的,最后是收的.显得有味道又含蓄.</p><p>&nbsp;老米的手扎很是精彩．尤见性情．老兄不去看看？</p>

熊志凌

写得好，如果能再写得活一点，可能会更好．行与行之间的呼应少了点．

柳长忠

秀美、漂亮！

陆舍无

<font color="#0000ff">很好!可见对米字下了不少功夫,但仅仅满足于把字写好,创作就很难理想;需要在用笔\结字等方面注意变化,把握好作品的气韵;技术方面的要求也许较容易达到,艺术性方面更需要锤炼和提高;谢谢带来好帖~~~</font>