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yunquan

请求大家斧正<img src="attachments/dvbbs/2006-6/20066141082624895.jpg" border="0" onload="if(this.width>screen.width*0.7) {this.resized=true; this.width=screen.width*0.7; this.alt=\'Click here to open new window\nCTRL+Mouse wheel to zoom in/out\';}" onmouseover="if(this.width>screen.width*0.7) {this.resized=true; this.width=screen.width*0.7; this.style.cursor=\'hand\'; this.alt=\'Click here to open new window\nCTRL+Mouse wheel to zoom in/out\';}" onclick="if(!this.resized) {return true;} else {window.open(\'attachments/dvbbs/2006-6/20066141082624895.jpg\');}" onmousewheel="return imgzoom(this);" alt="" /><br/><img src="attachments/dvbbs/2006-6/20066141084567270.jpg" border="0" onload="if(this.width>screen.width*0.7) {this.resized=true; this.width=screen.width*0.7; this.alt=\'Click here to open new window\nCTRL+Mouse wheel to zoom in/out\';}" onmouseover="if(this.width>screen.width*0.7) {this.resized=true; this.width=screen.width*0.7; this.style.cursor=\'hand\'; this.alt=\'Click here to open new window\nCTRL+Mouse wheel to zoom in/out\';}" onclick="if(!this.resized) {return true;} else {window.open(\'attachments/dvbbs/2006-6/20066141084567270.jpg\');}" onmousewheel="return imgzoom(this);" alt="" /><br/><img src="attachments/dvbbs/2006-6/2006614109234887.jpg" border="0" onload="if(this.width>screen.width*0.7) {this.resized=true; this.width=screen.width*0.7; this.alt=\'Click here to open new window\nCTRL+Mouse wheel to zoom in/out\';}" onmouseover="if(this.width>screen.width*0.7) {this.resized=true; this.width=screen.width*0.7; this.style.cursor=\'hand\'; this.alt=\'Click here to open new window\nCTRL+Mouse wheel to zoom in/out\';}" onclick="if(!this.resized) {return true;} else {window.open(\'attachments/dvbbs/2006-6/2006614109234887.jpg\');}" onmousewheel="return imgzoom(this);" alt="" /><br/>

yunquan

<div class="quote"><b>以下是引用<i>心德世家</i>在2006-11-7 20:45:34的发言：</b><br/><p>好字,学习了.</p><p>灵活自如,洒脱飘逸.</p><p></p></div><p>谢谢书友鼓励。</p>

心德世家

<p>好字,学习了.</p><p>灵活自如,洒脱飘逸.</p><p></p>

yunquan

请大家多多具体指点。

秦龙

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国峰

法度不够。（个人拙见）

秦龙

不错１

yunquan

<div class="quote"><b>以下是引用<i>黄开诚</i>在2006-9-8 17:03:52的发言：</b><br/>挺好的．老米的线条。章法再注意一下．可以写一些大的作品。</div><p>还是你好呀。经常可以获奖。与你握手。</p>

yunquan

<div class="quote"><b>以下是引用<i>陈立雄</i>在2006-9-8 16:03:56的发言：</b><br/>写得不错，但章法上有些小问题要解决。</div><p>谢谢指正，我自己也知道章法很重要，可不知从何处下手，肯请指导一下。</p>

黄开诚

挺好的．老米的线条。章法再注意一下．可以写一些大的作品。