我的习作,请砸砖!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

心德世家

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郑维江

<p>有一定基础.注意有的笔画太夸张了.个人观点</p>

百川归海

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陆舍无

继续努力,注意笔画变化,加强笔力~~~

心德世家

谢谢,请多指教.