[原创]初学篆书！方家砸！！

张业平

<p><img src="attachments/dvbbs/2006-11/200611521543958656.jpg" border="0" onload="if(this.width>screen.width*0.7) {this.resized=true; this.width=screen.width*0.7; this.alt=\'Click here to open new window\nCTRL+Mouse wheel to zoom in/out\';}" onmouseover="if(this.width>screen.width*0.7) {this.resized=true; this.width=screen.width*0.7; this.style.cursor=\'hand\'; this.alt=\'Click here to open new window\nCTRL+Mouse wheel to zoom in/out\';}" onclick="if(!this.resized) {return true;} else {window.open(\'attachments/dvbbs/2006-11/200611521543958656.jpg\');}" onmousewheel="return imgzoom(this);" alt="" /><br/><img src="attachments/dvbbs/2006-11/20061152155016219.jpg" border="0" onload="if(this.width>screen.width*0.7) {this.resized=true; this.width=screen.width*0.7; this.alt=\'Click here to open new window\nCTRL+Mouse wheel to zoom in/out\';}" onmouseover="if(this.width>screen.width*0.7) {this.resized=true; this.width=screen.width*0.7; this.style.cursor=\'hand\'; this.alt=\'Click here to open new window\nCTRL+Mouse wheel to zoom in/out\';}" onclick="if(!this.resized) {return true;} else {window.open(\'attachments/dvbbs/2006-11/20061152155016219.jpg\');}" onmousewheel="return imgzoom(this);" alt="" /><br/>第一次写篆书！！不得法</p><p>１！！！请大家指点！！</p>

提笔凝神

<p>有前途!</p>

张业平

<div class="quote"><b>以下是引用<i>提笔凝神</i>在2006-11-5 22:31:45的发言：</b><br/><p>有前途!</p></div><p></p>不行啊!!!看线条还是不流畅啊!!!唉~~~~~~~~~~

百川归海

这次我帮你顶!

逸墨轩主

运笔始转，提按各方面都要做到位

四象八牛

感觉用笔不实，有飘浮感。

张业平

<div class="quote"><b>以下是引用<i>逸墨轩主</i>在2006-11-7 10:18:03的发言：</b><br/>运笔始转，提按各方面都要做到位</div><p></p>谢谢兄弟的支持!!!

张业平

<div class="quote"><b>以下是引用<i>四象八牛</i>在2006-11-7 19:47:08的发言：</b><br/>感觉用笔不实，有飘浮感。</div><p></p>兄弟说的对!!![em17][em17]

陆舍无

小篆注意大小基本一致,结构平正,笔画圆转,忌折笔~~~

张业平

<div class="quote"><b>以下是引用<i>陆舍无</i>在2006-11-8 16:42:41的发言：</b><br/>小篆注意大小基本一致,结构平正,笔画圆转,忌折笔~~</div><div class="quote">多谢无总的教诲啊!!!!向你学习!!</div>