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作者: 熊新华 时间: 2006-11-4 00:37:13 标题: 近期的书法小品.请书友批评.

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作者: 陆舍无 时间: 2006-11-4 01:32:53

很好!可见对米字下了不少功夫,但仅仅满足于把字写好,创作就很难理想;需要在用笔\结字等方面注意变化,把握好作品的气韵;技术方面的要求也许较容易达到,艺术性方面更需要锤炼和提高;谢谢带来好帖~~~

作者: 柳长忠 时间: 2006-11-4 01:33:32

秀美、漂亮！

作者: 熊志凌 时间: 2006-11-4 09:05:53

写得好，如果能再写得活一点，可能会更好．行与行之间的呼应少了点．

作者: 舒海军 时间: 2006-11-4 15:32:43

以第二张为列."走"字第程式化,"把"字写放了.老米是最后一笔有几个提按动作的,最后是收的.显得有味道又含蓄. 老米的手扎很是精彩．尤见性情．老兄不去看看？

作者: 熊新华 时间: 2006-11-4 17:21:31

多谢楼上的几位书友的批评指正.我现在是重在打基础,目前最缺的就是作品的气韵.

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