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标题: 第一次参加中钢赛.真诚请教各位师友!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! [打印本页]

作者: 杨宇力 时间: 2006-9-15 02:37:11 标题: 第一次参加中钢赛.真诚请教各位师友!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

第一次参加中钢赛. 这两天写写命题内容, 因为常常喜欢看些篆隶方面的帖 所以草书中偶尔会夹杂一点篆隶的字法 也曾见吴昌硕潘天寿刘江等行书行楷中夹杂过一些 当代书坛也会见到不少,诸如刘彦湖等 不过他们都是名家 我想真诚请教各位师友: 要是我在草书中夹杂一点篆隶的字法算不算硬伤!? 随意挑出几例如下图片:<img src="attachments/dvbbs/2006-9/200691418364138947.jpg" border="0" onload="if(this.width>screen.width*0.7) {this.resized=true; this.width=screen.width*0.7; this.alt=\'Click here to open new window\nCTRL+Mouse wheel to zoom in/out\';}" onmouseover="if(this.width>screen.width*0.7) {this.resized=true; this.width=screen.width*0.7; this.style.cursor=\'hand\'; this.alt=\'Click here to open new window\nCTRL+Mouse wheel to zoom in/out\';}" onclick="if(!this.resized) {return true;} else {window.open(\'attachments/dvbbs/2006-9/200691418364138947.jpg\');}" onmousewheel="return imgzoom(this);" alt="" /> <img src="attachments/dvbbs/2006-9/20069141837411453.jpg" border="0" onload="if(this.width>screen.width*0.7) {this.resized=true; this.width=screen.width*0.7; this.alt=\'Click here to open new window\nCTRL+Mouse wheel to zoom in/out\';}" onmouseover="if(this.width>screen.width*0.7) {this.resized=true; this.width=screen.width*0.7; this.style.cursor=\'hand\'; this.alt=\'Click here to open new window\nCTRL+Mouse wheel to zoom in/out\';}" onclick="if(!this.resized) {return true;} else {window.open(\'attachments/dvbbs/2006-9/20069141837411453.jpg\');}" onmousewheel="return imgzoom(this);" alt="" />

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作者: 杨宇力 时间: 2006-9-15 02:37:59

此处首字"春"<img src="attachments/dvbbs/2006-9/200691418383340242.jpg" border="0" onload="if(this.width>screen.width*0.7) {this.resized=true; this.width=screen.width*0.7; this.alt=\'Click here to open new window\nCTRL+Mouse wheel to zoom in/out\';}" onmouseover="if(this.width>screen.width*0.7) {this.resized=true; this.width=screen.width*0.7; this.style.cursor=\'hand\'; this.alt=\'Click here to open new window\nCTRL+Mouse wheel to zoom in/out\';}" onclick="if(!this.resized) {return true;} else {window.open(\'attachments/dvbbs/2006-9/200691418383340242.jpg\');}" onmousewheel="return imgzoom(this);" alt="" />

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作者: 杨宇力 时间: 2006-9-15 02:39:20

<table height="100%" cellspacing="0" cellpadding="0" width="100%" border="0" style="TABLE-LAYOUT: fixed; WORD-WRAP: break-word;"><tbody><tr><td valign="top"><a href="http://www.zhoujizhong.com/misc.php?action=viewratings&tid=16051&pid=123117" name="pid123117" alt="查看评分记录"></a>此处"天","南"字</td></tr></tbody></table><img src="attachments/dvbbs/2006-9/200691418394845894.jpg" border="0" onload="if(this.width>screen.width*0.7) {this.resized=true; this.width=screen.width*0.7; this.alt=\'Click here to open new window\nCTRL+Mouse wheel to zoom in/out\';}" onmouseover="if(this.width>screen.width*0.7) {this.resized=true; this.width=screen.width*0.7; this.style.cursor=\'hand\'; this.alt=\'Click here to open new window\nCTRL+Mouse wheel to zoom in/out\';}" onclick="if(!this.resized) {return true;} else {window.open(\'attachments/dvbbs/2006-9/200691418394845894.jpg\');}" onmousewheel="return imgzoom(this);" alt="" /> <img src="attachments/dvbbs/2006-9/20069141840339997.jpg" border="0" onload="if(this.width>screen.width*0.7) {this.resized=true; this.width=screen.width*0.7; this.alt=\'Click here to open new window\nCTRL+Mouse wheel to zoom in/out\';}" onmouseover="if(this.width>screen.width*0.7) {this.resized=true; this.width=screen.width*0.7; this.style.cursor=\'hand\'; this.alt=\'Click here to open new window\nCTRL+Mouse wheel to zoom in/out\';}" onclick="if(!this.resized) {return true;} else {window.open(\'attachments/dvbbs/2006-9/20069141840339997.jpg\');}" onmousewheel="return imgzoom(this);" alt="" />

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作者: 杨宇力 时间: 2006-9-15 02:40:44

此处"清"字,另"明"字这么写算不算草法有问题?<img src="attachments/dvbbs/2006-9/200691418413839058.jpg" border="0" onload="if(this.width>screen.width*0.7) {this.resized=true; this.width=screen.width*0.7; this.alt=\'Click here to open new window\nCTRL+Mouse wheel to zoom in/out\';}" onmouseover="if(this.width>screen.width*0.7) {this.resized=true; this.width=screen.width*0.7; this.style.cursor=\'hand\'; this.alt=\'Click here to open new window\nCTRL+Mouse wheel to zoom in/out\';}" onclick="if(!this.resized) {return true;} else {window.open(\'attachments/dvbbs/2006-9/200691418413839058.jpg\');}" onmousewheel="return imgzoom(this);" alt="" />

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作者: 杨宇力 时间: 2006-9-15 02:42:37

请各位师友给予指点!谢谢啦!

作者: 含雪轩主人 时间: 2006-9-15 07:17:39

有些生硬。

作者: 含雪轩主人 时间: 2006-9-15 07:22:32

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作者: 杨宇力 时间: 2006-9-15 08:12:48

<div class="quote">以下是引用含雪轩主人在2006-9-14 23:17:39的发言： 有些生硬。</div><blockquote><table class="tablebody2" width="90%" border="0" style="TABLE-LAYOUT: fixed; WORD-BREAK: break-all;"><tbody><tr><td width="100%" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 12pt;"><img alt="发贴心情" src="http://bbs.yingbishufa.com/Skins/Default/topicface/face1.gif" align="absMiddle" border="0"/>  感谢含雪轩主人的批评！是的，最近是想自己的作品有所变化，但难以定位和把握方向感觉到艺术观念字外工夫的重要啊欢迎各位师友继续批评，不吝赐教！拜谢！！！</td></tr></tbody></table></blockquote>

作者: 崔伦强 时间: 2006-9-15 22:13:37

杨老师,吾以为狂野了些.不够涵蕴.

作者: 【米真居士】 时间: 2006-9-16 04:24:03

好！！有想法！~~有追求！~~~~~~

作者: 杨宇力 时间: 2006-9-16 07:05:01

<div class="quote">以下是引用崔伦强在2006-9-15 14:13:37的发言： 杨老师,吾以为狂野了些.不够涵蕴.</div>是的!我接受意见!谢谢崔兄!!!

作者: 杨宇力 时间: 2006-9-16 07:05:49

<div class="quote">以下是引用【米真居士】在2006-9-15 20:24:03的发言： 好！！有想法！~~有追求！~~~~~~</div>多谢居士鼓励!!!

作者: 孟凡飞 时间: 2006-9-18 01:42:59

好字,行气好奇特!要是加入古帖的营养效果会更好的!

作者: 国峰 时间: 2006-9-28 02:25:39

欣赏！

作者: 陆从法 时间: 2006-9-28 23:00:03

不错学习

作者: 秦龙 时间: 2006-10-5 20:12:44

<div class="quote">以下是引用【米真居士】在2006-9-15 20:24:03的发言： 好！！有想法！~~有追求！~~~~~~</div>

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