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标题: 最近无长进，临帖求批！拜谢！(杨宇力硬笔临古诗四帖) [打印本页]

作者: 杨宇力 时间: 2006-8-7 21:35:50 标题: 最近无长进，临帖求批！拜谢！(杨宇力硬笔临古诗四帖)

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作者: 杨宇力 时间: 2006-8-7 21:43:08

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作者: 陆舍无 时间: 2006-8-7 23:44:39

临得很好,注意一下节奏,有些笔画可厚重一点,圆转稍稍弱化,加强力度~~~

作者: 陆舍无 时间: 2006-8-7 23:46:07

顶起来,欢迎宇力多发帖~~

作者: 国峰 时间: 2006-8-8 00:05:17

临的好。只要用心，定会成功。

作者: 肖文军 时间: 2006-8-8 00:48:33

临的好。只要用心，定会成功

作者: 何涛 时间: 2006-8-8 02:23:29

精彩！！！[em02][em02][em02]

作者: 郑可春 时间: 2006-8-8 02:50:44

非常气派!

作者: 段振祥 时间: 2006-8-8 03:05:42

神采不错，有些笔画再粗些会更精彩。

作者: 康宝辉 时间: 2006-8-8 04:26:18

[em05]气息不错

作者: 杨宇力 时间: 2006-8-8 07:51:59

啊!没想到老无帮我顶起来啦!并且有非常好的意见!!!感谢啊!!!各位师友的鼓励和指点我一并打包收藏!这四帖我还临得不熟,且运笔过快,草率,没留住笔,没沉下去.最该死的是节奏老把握不好!我会继续努力临,希望从中吸取些养分.在此请教大家:张旭的一些草法过简且少见,不知道某些字能否按通俗草法作一些改变呢?再次拜谢!

作者: 朱凌云 时间: 2006-8-8 18:43:03

宇力的草书越来越见精神了，照此下去，定能成大气候！！

作者: 杨宇力 时间: 2006-8-8 21:15:03

<div class="quote">以下是引用朱凌云在2006-8-8 10:43:03的发言： 宇力的草书越来越见精神了，照此下去，定能成大气候！！</div>谢谢凌云鼓励!现在还太初级,要学的太多,没时间啊!对了我问一下:为啥近来论坛每回一帖就必须重登陆方可再回帖或再次发帖.很是麻烦!比如这次回完帖我就得马上关掉论坛然后又重进入才有继续留言的机会!?

作者: 陈艳伟 时间: 2006-8-9 02:38:09

学习了！

作者: 杨宇力 时间: 2006-8-10 09:36:40

<div class="quote">以下是引用陈艳伟在2006-8-8 18:38:09的发言： 学习了！</div>谢艳伟兄!请多指教!

作者: 朱凌云 时间: 2006-8-10 18:20:29

<div class="quote">以下是引用杨宇力在2006-8-8 13:15:03的发言： 谢谢凌云鼓励!现在还太初级,要学的太多,没时间啊!对了我问一下:为啥近来论坛每回一帖就必须重登陆方可再回帖或再次发帖.很是麻烦!比如这次回完帖我就得马上关掉论坛然后又重进入才有继续留言的机会!?</div>宇力，这事您问问管理员吧！！有的事我也不太明白！！但我这发帖及回帖是不需要重新登陆的！！

作者: 杨宇力 时间: 2006-8-10 20:22:21

<div class="quote">以下是引用朱凌云在2006-8-10 10:20:29的发言： 宇力，这事您问问管理员吧！！有的事我也不太明白！！但我这发帖及回帖是不需要重新登陆的！！</div>噢,好的.三克油!!!

作者: 【米真居士】 时间: 2006-8-10 22:45:03

精彩！象楼主学习

作者: 方存双 时间: 2006-8-12 05:34:35

临的好啊!这才对杨兄的胃口!学习了!我很欣赏这种风格的作品,可惜自己性情才情都不够,难以企及,连老婆都说我的字太呆板,呵呵,奈何奈何![em17]

作者: 杨宇力 时间: 2006-8-12 23:22:27

感谢老米和存双的关注鼓励!!!你们都太谦虚了!我当继续努力![em01]

作者: 黄开诚 时间: 2006-9-9 01:01:36

很好。请问杨兄是用什么笔写的？可能是工具的原因．偏锋多了一些。线条显得不够厚．

作者: 黄开诚 时间: 2006-9-9 01:02:31

铅丝可以弱化．

作者: 杨宇力 时间: 2006-9-10 04:12:59

谢谢开诚指点!可用应硬笔王写.

作者: 舒海军 时间: 2006-9-15 05:00:45

又学习了一次。。硬笔王哪儿有卖的呢？感觉还是偏锋多了。转的地方弱了。可否在转的地方调好锋。慢写点？   初学之人。说的不对的地方请取舍。。

作者: 杨宇力 时间: 2006-9-16 07:09:26

<div class="quote">以下是引用舒海军在2006-9-14 21:00:45的发言： 又学习了一次。。硬笔王哪儿有卖的呢？感觉还是偏锋多了。转的地方弱了。可否在转的地方调好锋。慢写点？   初学之人。说的不对的地方请取舍。。</div>你的意见很好!感谢!!!硬笔王哪儿有卖你可以问问天下行者(陈舟波),因我没用过,只是猜测和自己磨制的笔不会有大的差别``````

作者: 昆仑山人 时间: 2006-9-17 08:50:29

来向宇力兄取经了：）

作者: 杨宇力 时间: 2006-10-1 08:28:47

<div class="quote">以下是引用昆仑山人在2006-9-17 0:50:29的发言： 来向宇力兄取经了：）</div>不敢当的！还要向昆仑兄学习！

作者: 心德世家 时间: 2006-11-8 04:20:22

好字!向你学习了

作者: 枕云阁主 时间: 2006-11-21 18:40:02

大开眼界,学习!!![em17]

作者: 杨宇力 时间: 2006-11-27 08:19:45

<div class="quote">以下是引用心德世家在2006-11-7 20:20:22的发言： 好字!向你学习了</div>谢谢鼓励！！！多多指教！！！

作者: 杨宇力 时间: 2006-11-27 08:21:13

<div class="quote">以下是引用枕云阁主在2006-11-21 10:40:02的发言： 大开眼界,学习!!![em17]</div>阁主果酱！！！向你学习！！！

作者: 阿山 时间: 2006-11-28 02:08:25

<div class="quote">以下是引用何涛在2006-8-7 18:23:29的发言： 精彩！！！[em02][em02][em02]</div>[em11]

作者: 杨宇力 时间: 2006-12-8 06:05:48

谢谢各位！！！

作者: 鸣远 时间: 2007-1-18 01:36:41

犹如古藤绕树[em01][em01][em01]

作者: 杨宇力 时间: 2007-3-11 02:14:42

<div class="quote">以下是引用鸣远在2007-1-17 17:36:41的发言： 犹如古藤绕树[em01][em01][em01]</div>谢谢鸣远兄关注.

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