查看完整版本: [原创]下午写了张楷书,各位请批!

[原创]下午写了张楷书,各位请批!

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<p>高手啊，学习先！</p>[em10][em10][em10][em10][em10]

得欧神韵，学习学习！！！

<p>多谢楼上两兄指教鼓励!</p>

陈兄进步好大哟，向你学习！！！！！

好字学习了

很是不错，学习！！个人认为落款略显草率，如用行书尚佳，丙“戌”不能写成“戍”

<div class="quote"><b>以下是引用<i>逸墨轩主</i>在2006-7-7 8:21:39的发言：</b><br/>很是不错，学习！！个人认为落款略显草率，如用行书尚佳，丙“戌”不能写成“戍”</div><p>这个意见提得好！</p>

欧体结合了少数其他书家的楷体，不错！学习

<p>写的好。说点自己的看法。楷书再少些尖利多些厚重如何？落款稍显草率，感觉行草书没有楷书基础扎实。</p>

欧字神韵，得其几分．笔画再舒展些，墨色再均匀些，更好。

字写的不错,生了一些,是初学吧~~~

<div class="quote"><b>以下是引用<i>段振祥</i>在2006-7-15 16:15:12的发言：</b><br/><p>写的好。说点自己的看法。楷书再少些尖利多些厚重如何？落款稍显草率，感觉行草书没有楷书基础扎实。</p></div><p>同意此观点。</p>

<p>不错，学习了</p>

不错啊

<p>好字！落款字偏大！并注意“硬伤”！</p>

欧楷写得好！

<div class="quote"><b>以下是引用<i>因心堂</i>在2007-11-5 12:55:41的发言：</b><br/>这还不好,学习</div><p></p>光学习还不行!得敬礼加学习!